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Jess M. Giessel
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Username: Jmg

Post Number: 1
Registered: 08-2009
Posted on Wednesday, August 26, 2009 - 06:47 pm:   

A lyric I wrote the other night between songs at a karaoke bar in Tacoma, Washington. After I was finished I read it and thought it had a "Go-Betweens feel" to it... Comments?

"Dragon Kites"

Right now I wish I was sitting
in a little bar in pre-war Tokyo,
with two Geisha girls,
a plate of sushi,
and a box of good sake.
The calligraphy waves in the breeze,
the Temple bells ring,
as a tram whispers by,
and dragon kites fill the sky.

What happened to the Tokyo I love
without the neon and smoke?
A storm of 29s blew it away,
it belongs to another day.
All that is left is the Diet
and dragon kites.

The winds of time have not been kind,
to ancient Dai Nippon.
It is now just Nintendo and karaoke.
Yamamoto in his grave cries,
for a smog filled sky,
where dragon kites still fly.
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Allen Belz
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Username: Abpositive

Post Number: 1610
Registered: 09-2006
Posted on Wednesday, August 26, 2009 - 07:48 pm:   

Was going to say it had a little Robert feel to it, but then read it again and thought Grant...

Howdy neighbor (I'm about 70 miles south of you), and welcome to the board...
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Pádraig Collins
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Username: Pádraig_collins

Post Number: 3071
Registered: 05-2005
Posted on Thursday, August 27, 2009 - 12:43 am:   

I can imagine Grant singing that alright.
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Geoff Holmes
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Username: Geoff

Post Number: 548
Registered: 05-2005
Posted on Thursday, August 27, 2009 - 07:08 am:   

Maybe some of us could put the words to music....
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Jess M. Giessel
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Username: Jmg

Post Number: 2
Registered: 08-2009
Posted on Thursday, August 27, 2009 - 07:36 am:   

I'd love to hear that, Geoff!

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